Reflection for Alsup & Bush, Introduction, Ch. 2-3
“What exactly does ownership mean and how does a teacher encourage it in his students? Ownership by our definition means something akin to taking responsibility …” (Alsup, p. 41)
I am currently working on making my students understand that their work is the legacy that they leave behind for humanity. I am trying to impress upon them that their work, not just their communication with their friends and family, can and should be an extension of their hearts, minds, and spirits. I am trying to frame class work in the most positive way I can because I am facing huge failure rates. In my one class with 29 students, only 7 are currently passing. Clearly, there is very little ownership being expressed. I know the children are capable; I just have to figure out a way to reach them and make class work more of a daily priority for them. The chapter goes on to mention the idea of Service Learning (Alsup, 42). While this is not a possibility for my immediate teaching career, service learning is one of my future teaching goals. I would like to gain one to two years more experience as a high school educator before I attempt to incorporate this into my curriculum. I believe service learning is one way my students might take their academic careers more seriously. I think this because the child can see an immediate connection between academia and the “real” or work world. This has a surprising way of making students or people wake up and realize that they will at some point have to apply what they have learned in an academic setting to a job or task in a real world setting. It brings students directly from the abstract to the concrete.I was surprised at how critical this text was in regard to traditional grammar instruction (Alsup, 44). I have to say that I am at odds with many of the instructional practices and teacher comments I read in this week’s readings. The text was obviously biased toward teaching grammar in context and using a hybrid approach to grammar instruction. The following quote demonstrates the author’s bias:
“In one corner are the traditionalists, who value grammar unconditionally and teach it as a separate and distinct part of their curricula. In the other corner are the teachers who know and accept the research demonstrating that … (the text goes on to define teaching grammar in context)”(Alsup, p. 80).
This above sentence implies that people ”in the know” teach grammar in context. People who do not are incredibly out of sync and behind the times. The text goes on to explain that in order for us as educators to teach grammar properly, we must have a stance on grammar and get current research and theory to back that stance up (Alsup, 81). I was a student who suffered from the majority of my English teachers ignoring the rules of grammar. I was lucky enough to have two very gifted English teachers (eighth and ninth grade, Elba McCue and Mrs. Morrison) who taught me some grammar, but it was largely discouraged in the classroom during the seventies and early eighties (when I was in middle and high school). Because of this lack of instruction, I find myself envious of those with a stronger knowledge of our language, its classifications and rules. I believe that we need to go back to our roots and have a heavier emphasis on grammar and the rules of our language. I believe this because proper grammar defends people from things like racism (no one will know where you are from if you stoically follow the rules of our language) and accusations of stupidity and ignorance (educated people speak grammatically correct English — it is the language of power. I feel we need to teach the language of power to our students).
You can already guess how appalled I was at the narrative that described the teacher who threw grammar out of his (I believe they called him Dave) classroom altogether (Alsup, ps. 89-93).This texts saving grace for me was the following quote:
“Doniger argues that analysis of the grammatical choices an author makes can help readers interpret and understand literary texts.” (Alsup, 102)
I do not believe a student can accurately determine an author’s grammatical choices without a pretty intense study of the grammar of our language. This study would also have to include a heavy emphasis on rhetorical grammar in order for a child to begin identifying and understanding grammatical choices on the part of a professional writer.
What I gained the most from in this text was the section on assessment. I am a nervous and reluctant grader, but this text helped me not to feel alone in my sorrow. The following quote helped me understand the importance and purpose of grading:
“After teachers have faced self-doubt or frustration and yet made decisions about writing evaluation, they should trust in their own developing expertise, and they should be able to articulate the decisions they make so that students clearly understand all the components of their own classroom writing environments.” (Alsup, p. 64)
I always felt a conflict in regard to grading because it defines students (especially in today’s academic environment) and pigeon-holes them. The grades and tests that we teachers give our unsuspecting and naïve students in high school sift our precious babes into educational paths that lead to career paths. Some of these paths inevitably, for some students, lead to poverty and a life of difficulty with little or few options of advancement or further learning. I found it a paradox that we, as educators, the ones who are supposed to use knowledge and learning as the great liberating force in the lives of our students, by assigning these grades (grades that will ultimately define these students), we teachers are the first ones to begin to shackle our students with these parameters that narrow their options or choices in life. I found this reality incredibly disturbing because it showed me the consequence of my failure.
What the above quote did for me was it taught me that when I use fair instruction and make all the rules clear and accessible to every student, then I am truly doing my job as an educator. Students must choose to educate themselves and choose to turn towards knowledge and learning. My job is to facilitate this choice and provide accurate materials that will help guide and prepare my students to reach and stay on the path of success.
Alsup, J. & Bush, J. (2003). “But will it work with real students?”: Scenarios for teaching English language arts. Urbana, IL: NCTE.